by MaSkEdSoUl Aug 29, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Am I the only one |
by Kristina
Wow! I can totally relate to this in EVERY way and I'm sure a lot of other people can as well. Now this poem was definitely amazing. I think you did a brillian job on it. It had a very good flow to it. This poem said just what I think and how I feel. EXCELLENT! 5/5 |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Aww. this was sad. =[ |
by ECILA ice
I love this one.. simple yet the emotions is really revealing and the cold invisble hands or the words really toched my heart. and honestly, sometimes i feel the same way so don't think you're alone. |
I like how you ask all the questions that people question themselves..and when you are in this state you seem to want to reach out to others and not feel so alone..Great emotion..though reread it there are a few spelling/grammatical errors. But great work and keep it up. |
Beautiful!...and no your not the only one, I can very much relate...excellent poem=] |