First Move

by Shinobi   Aug 29, 2007


She stands beside me
She looks so good
Right there I can see
That I love her more than anyone would

She stares with those such bright eyes
My heart misses a beat because of the sight
She smiles the smile that never dies
And I feel so tight

I try to hold on
I try holding back from the sight
Suddenly my self control is gone
And I hug her with all my might

The first move is done
I feel kind of clever
When I hold this angel in my arms
I know that I will never let go, ever

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  • 17 years ago

    by Blissful

    Wow that was so cute. I loved the emotion all throughout and the story you told was one many can relate too. I did feel that some of the rhymes seemed forced but it still deserves a *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by Nula

    Nice expressions, i love it, its beautiful