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by Shinobi Aug 29, 2007 category : Love, romance / first love
She stands beside me She looks so good Right there I can see That I love her more than anyone would She stares with those such bright eyes My heart misses a beat because of the sight She smiles the smile that never dies And I feel so tight I try to hold on I try holding back from the sight Suddenly my self control is gone And I hug her with all my might The first move is done I feel kind of clever When I hold this angel in my arms I know that I will never let go, ever
by Blissful
Wow that was so cute. I loved the emotion all throughout and the story you told was one many can relate too. I did feel that some of the rhymes seemed forced but it still deserves a *5/5*
by Nula
Nice expressions, i love it, its beautiful