First meeting and a Kiss

by Nula   Aug 29, 2007


First time, we met in the park.
We start talking and then he asked me,
Can I kiss You??
On the beginning I kept silent, but I said Yes.
Then he brought closer and kissed me,
I felt his tongue, it was fine emotion,
I never felt something like this,
before when he kissed me,
It was my first Kiss, I felt great.
I LOVE YOU BABY.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Amber Fuller

    Reallly gooood i love it

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Awwwww.. Wow, I bet u get butterfly after the first kissed. Sound so kute, u make it short and very kute on it! Everyone can't forget their first kiss, mostly is good and mostly is sucks. So mine is good and yours are good! Nice one girl!

  • 16 years ago

    by kia

    Awwww this was cute.....u can never forget ya first kiss
    ~KISSES~

  • 17 years ago

    by Abu3li

    Simple but really cute

    keep it up

  • 17 years ago

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