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by FountainsOfBlood Aug 29, 2007 category : Dark, fantasy / other
Smile so repulsive Inside the deepest mark Nothing but evil Inside her every thought Sickening things no mortal thinks Trespassing her mind Entering Satin's lair Releasing this dark shadow
by Isabella
I think that the poem is quite good. But I can't help feeling, that the last sentence is a little off. I think the sentence ruins the poems flow.