You messages got through.
You might wan to re-read it. You got one typing mistake and one gramma.
I'm not saying that it is bad. I know the feeling you express in your poem.
The typing mistake is AND instead of AN, and the gramma slip up is SMACK instead of SMACKED.

Sorry, I remembered wrong.
It's A instead of AN. ;)

HA HA HA HA. that wuz funny!!! lol