The entire poem was deep. But the end made it lose the depth a little, but made me smile as well. "F#ck it, bring on the rain" it's deep but at the same time its kinda funny. Maybe I'm just immature... lol. Anyway, I really liked the poem. You're very good at writing deep feelings. I'm envious... 5/5

This was a really beautiful poem, it was really moving and reminded me of other poems I've written in the past.
I really enjoyed reading it, thanks for writing! You're an amazing poet!
5/5
~gabriella

Yeah sweetness i loved the ending the whole piece was like entirely Omg but i dont like the fact its in love poems this seems to me to personal for love poems but hey thats just my opinon - raindrops 5/5