by JaM Aug 29, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Please take away my pain |
by lokitaaXti
- i relly enjoyed this poem . |
by TearStainedMess
I like the feeling portrayed in this poem. |
by Sarah
Oooh wow!!!! Beautifully well written..luv this one..the whole poem was emotional..enjoyable piece to read..good joB. |
This is BEAUITFUL and full of emotion and.... well emotion. I was I mean IS so strong... Keep writing. 5/5 |
Its a sad poem.. but i see you put much emotion into it.. and well its really good.. it was nicely written nice job 5/5 |