Aw sweetie, don't know who this angel is, but I do hope they can help.... a beautifully sad and emotional piece.

I need you be careful with the pieces,
^I think you need to add the word "to" between you be, other than that, its a great read. Another heartfelt write by you.

Its a sad poem.. but i see you put much emotion into it.. and well its really good.. it was nicely written nice job 5/5

This is BEAUITFUL and full of emotion and.... well emotion. I was I mean IS so strong... Keep writing. 5/5

Oooh wow!!!! Beautifully well written..luv this one..the whole poem was emotional..enjoyable piece to read..good joB.
-sarah

I like the feeling portrayed in this poem.

- i relly enjoyed this poem .
i can see that yu putt much thouqht and feelinq into itt , which makes itts evin better .