Wow! great poem, filled with emotion and I can relate...excellent job once again!

Brooke<3

Ah yes, those secrets, they can be a hassle to the mind.... you must release them so you can see a better tomorrow.... let it all out metaphorically within your words.... a very heartfelt and deep write.

Wonderfull mostly because i feel like that too but it was great

I wouldn't dare tell a soul,
about the things I've done.
I couldn't begin to explain,
how I found it fun.

OMFG This is... This is ME! This... You just.. Its..... OMG.
I'm sorry but this is a stunning piece. It's so me it's like.. Like you're a mirror. Beautiful.
5/5

First stanza is the greatest. You expressed emotions excellently and this piece has wonderful atmosphere. You described sadness superbly.
Well done! 5/5