Michael,
First of all I love any poem that relates to God and his magnificiance (sp). I think this one is an excellent piece and I wish that more people could hear the message and accept the love of our creator.

You have done a great job here sweetie. I am pleased to have stumbled upon this and honored to feel the passion well up inside of you. The passion of love and purity is truly a gift from above indeed.

Thank you for sharinf this.

--Sher

Beautifully written and well said.
There is only one Truth,,,
Aleph, through Mem, to Tav
which is Emetz,,,The whole scope of all!
Peace and Blessings

Was looking forward to reading this poem since you shared on the discussion board that you had an idea of an oxymoron... and here it is - in all its glory. Fantastic job. I really loved the first stanza the most. Definitely catchy and the rhythm of it was great too. And I liked how you were referring to Creation vs Evolution but it was subtle - not like a heated debate.

Brilliant. :)

Mo

I love these kind of poems, the ones that make you think, and bring back questions we all ask ourselves. Great Job 5/5

Very Intriguing Persceptive..I Like It!!

5.5**
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