Turning away from you (lyrics)

God,,, I loved it, it was very meaningful =] keep the work up i am sure i will read more of your work

This is a great song. i think that with the right type of music it would sound wonderful. The flow of the words were amazing, and the emotion you have put in it is wonderful. 5/5

Kalee

Nagawa koh na poh....galing mu poh...magaling karin cguroh kumanta.....^_^ 5/5

That rocks, its a little sad but hey, it works. I am not sure how to crtique lyrics lol
the flow seemed good, the emtion was strong, the word was absoulty amazing, I would mind hearing this to music. all in all you did a great job 5/5

Yo bro this song rocks!