Good poem. Wonderfully written even though it was written in a short amount of time. The first line got my attention because I didn't expect to see something about a tree in a love poem. :p. But yeah, this was really good poem. 5/5

Keep it up!

-Shannon <3

Amazing poem.Flowed very easily and very descriptive.I could picture the scene in my head.Even better the second time reading.A 5/5 from me yet again.
Keep up the good work,
Looking forward to your next poem,
Miranda

It's a very nice poem, I get a very pleasant image in my mind when I read it. It's very very sweet. We all hope to find this kind of love one day. Very good job on this one. ^^

.:Danielle:.

Sweet poem. nice imagery. I like how the flow is disrupted in the last stanza, lending emphasis to the last line. nice work!

Wow, I wouldn't be able to write a poem like that in 7 minutes or less. Thats amazing!
The imagery in it was great, you could almost feel the emotions, and also, it's a very sweet poem!! You should let that special someone read it, I'm sure he'd like it too. Good job on it!!

I think you did well, seeing as it only took you 7 minutes, this was very good.
this flowed well and had good imagery and the words were awesome
love Tara-Kay
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Wow its a great poem i loved it. great work 5/5

Wow it left me wanting to know what would happen next great write 5/5 all the way!

laura

Wow. This is beautiful. You captured the moment amazingly! The flow was great and I was left with a warm feeling. And you wrote it in just 7 min. Wow. Amazing! 5/5

~Kat~

For the first part I was wondering how I could be a love poem so I wanted to keep reading.
Good imagery
5/5

For a 7 minute poem this is pretty good.. its not one of the best poems i've read but it was definately a good poem..i enjoyed it. 5/5

For a poem written in 7 mins this is wonderful. i really wish that my poems were a great as all of yours are. 5/5

Kalee

Yet another amazing poem. I would say poetry is your life. 5/5

This is beautiful...I love the imagery you painted here, really created vivid pictures in my mind, you did a wonderful job with this, it was very sweet.

7 minutes?? Now that's talent for you!! Great poem!

5.5**
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I loved this poem. I may say that a lot, but with this one, I mean it way more. You definately put a lot of emotion into this. I loved the last stanza the most. Great job. 5/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

Waw you write it fast , but it could be better but you know sometimes we write it and couldnt change i dont know i realy love the last part when you say:Her hand held firmly in his,
her breast pressed against his chest,
she looked up into his love filled eyes,
and knew he was the one.