Mannequin Woes

by Lonely Little Dreamer   Aug 30, 2007


Perfectly rigid you stand there staring.
That same sweet smile upon your face.
Naturally flawless with your plastic skin,
Appearing empty headed, soulless within.

Like a drone, you go about your daily life.
You come across superficial and shallow,
Walking along in your picture perfect world,
Disregarding all the glances and sneers.

People see your statue like features,
Judging without a word.
Ignoring what they don't see,
The faulty girl inside your plastic shell.

Desperate to break free from your cage,
Willing for them to see the soul you possess.
Turning to the crowd, you try to speak;
They turn away instead.

Alone you stand there, an image of perfection,
Trying to shed a tear, wanting to be human.
Slowly you become what everyone sees, a mannequin;
As your face cracks from the sadness.

Now that the mask has cracked, it flakes away.
Piece by piece the plastic flesh falls to the ground.
Crumbling, your body breaks;
Revealing what has been hidden inside.

A face once faultless, now poxed with imperfections;
Revealing true happiness, nothing is fake.
Rushing forward, towards the world;
Reaching out, with each step you take.

Again you find the crowd and try to speak,
But you are stopped with disbelief.
Catcalls and looks of disgust you meet.
Acceptance, is just a dream.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This poem read like it was being spoken, so pure so real and so true. It was another amazing piece of work. loved it xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by turtle

    That was one great poem!.. :)

    The flow went really well and your choice of words really went with it. It gave the right "feel" to the poem and helped show the "story" of the poem.

    gratz and keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    Srry i ment to write

    "Acceptance is just a dream, after all.."

  • 17 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    WOW i raelly thought that this was soooo good. i think that you captured this wonderfully. Excellent job

    my fav...
    "For she cannot miss what was never there. "

  • 17 years ago

    by Rocky

    I really enjoyed this poem. it had a natural flow to it. But more than that i feel as if i understand the idea behind it. it depressing how we try to spend our whole life tying to be anything but ourselves.The irony of it is actually rather amusing. Good work.
    Rocky

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