by Lonely Little Dreamer Aug 30, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
Perfectly rigid you stand there staring. |
This poem read like it was being spoken, so pure so real and so true. It was another amazing piece of work. loved it xxx alex xxx |
by turtle
That was one great poem!.. :) |
by GoodMEMORIES
Srry i ment to write |
by GoodMEMORIES
WOW i raelly thought that this was soooo good. i think that you captured this wonderfully. Excellent job |
by Rocky
I really enjoyed this poem. it had a natural flow to it. But more than that i feel as if i understand the idea behind it. it depressing how we try to spend our whole life tying to be anything but ourselves.The irony of it is actually rather amusing. Good work. |