Should Tomorrow Never Come

by I Seem to be the Heartless   Aug 30, 2007


Should tomorrow never come,
Did I tell you all I had to say,
Did I do all I could today,
Should tomorrow never come.

Should tomorrow never come,
Did I tell you often enough how you make me feel,
Did I make you understand that my love is real,
Should tomorrow never come.

Should tomorrow never come,
Did I tell you just how perfect you are,
Did I let you know that if I can't hear your heartbeat, you're too far,
Should tomorrow never come.

Should tomorrow never come,
Did you know that I was always true,
And do you know just how much I love you,
Should tomorrow never come.

Should tomorrow never come,
Did I show you that I love you in every possible way,
And that I'll always love you, come what may,
Should tomorrow never come.

29 August 2007

For Philip

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  • 17 years ago

    by Erica Christian

    Nice poem

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Beautiful piece dear! I think my only suggestion is to make sure your middle lines follow the same flow the whole way through. Use the same syllable count. It's something I too have been counseled to work on from other poets, and the more I write using it, the better my pieces are. The easier they roll off the tongue. Also, you could possibly use question marks in this piece, seeing as you are posing this as a question to him. Don't think I am trying to downgrade your poems, I just think it's twice as great a comment if you learn something from it. We all hear the same old "it's great" comments, and that doesn't help us. That let's us think that we are as good as we are gonna get, and that's not true. We can always work on our poetry!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by JaM

    Great write. I enjoyed this poem and the style.

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