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by JaM Aug 30, 2007 category : Sadness, depression / about death
Bleeding from my eyes Cause there's no water to cry Poured out forever
by Nix
Very unique, short but powerful I really like it, first line is amazing. Interesting topic and atmosphere is great. 5/5
by Angie
Not bad, you have grasped the concept of a senryu very well. Just one small thing, change their's to there's.... awesome job.
