OMG, this was beautiful in so many different ways. In a way it sounded like he killed himself and left you to face the world on your own, leaving you no sense of direction at all. I really love this piece, keep it up. 5/5

Sad and yet amazing. This shows great pain and anger. I hope that the healing process does not take long.

This is a wonderful piece.

--Sher

I love it
=]

Wow, awesome poem your really good!!

I really like this one..

I love how u wrote this.. i had goosebumps reading this... it's so full of emotions..i can actually feel wat u were feeling.. GREAT!

This write remembered me to my own brother, who I haven't seen for almost six months now because of an stupid arguement.
The lines
"How can you hurt someone like this?"
"Wont you regret the birthdays youll miss?"

Hit hard to me because that's exactly how it's been going, he has missed a lot of birthdays in my family.
Arrghh just wanted to share my little misery.
Anyway such a good write :)

5/5

xo angelique

Ohhhh....this peom is sooo sad, very heartfelt and you can feel all the emotion flowing out of it. a wondeful piece!

I loved this. the depth and emotion in this piece were beautifully portrayed as was the unfairness and anger. i found this piece to be heart breaking and filled with melancholy but non the less beautifully written.