Comments : He's Everything You'll Never Lack

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    He passes by, your muscles tense,
    Your racing heart begins to freeze.
    A mem'ry numbing every sense,
    Goosebumps form beneath your sleeves.

    the whole poem I felt like that stanza because I could see it in my head, feel it in my heart. No words could describe the depth of how this poem affected me. I felt like it was me, parts of it that is. Great, fantastic, wonderful job!
    *ME*