You took the title and ran with it.... its simply breathtaking, the words you chose are amazing and the rhyme and flow are perfect, I love it.... well done.

Wow the words you used and the way you put it together really great great great job i would say more but i dont know what else to say other than once again wow!!!

Very well done i would have to say this poem caught my attention and i give it a 5/5

So romantic and loving. I know there is that special person I would like to share this with and show them these things that you speak of.

Very nicely done hun. A joyful read.

--Sher

I love how u wrote it soo nice to read, makes u feel real nice:)