Love Spell

by Bob   Aug 30, 2007


What satanic witchcraft or sorcery has control of my heart?!
Push me into a cosmic vacuum thus ripping me apart.
Silence has come like the calm before the raging storm.
Nervously standing here at the entrance to her dorm.
Do I dare to knock on her pine wooden door?
Reaching up quivering I stop not being able to do more.
Jumping slightly I hear my vile name called from behind.
Gulping cautiously I turn around to see what I might find.
The lovely shockingly beautiful maiden is in my way.
Can I possibly summon the courage to ask her today?
Embarrassingly all I can dryly speak is hi.
A nod from that blond hair laden head is her reply.
My future with this angel is looking very bleak.
Come on you idiot you imbecile find words to speak.
Bravely in her hands I place my humble honorable fate.
For now I pop the burning question for a date.
Oh why must perfection keep me in this evil suspense?
I am sweating like a rain storm for I am so tense.
Like lava I am scorching with overwhelming wonder.
How long does it take for one goddess to ponder?
Quiet my pounding heart I think I hope this answer is yes.
Yes has escaped her peach blossom fairy lips oh my bless.
Unbearable unmerciful excitement escapes despite being caged
Kissing nipping your lips sweet like wine that has been aged.

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  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I'd break it up into stanza's if I were you. For some reason it's more pleasing to the eye and you don't feel so overwhelmed or intimidated by all the words.

    I do not typically like love poems, because I feel like people just keep repeating the same thing over and over again. The good thing about this one though is your vocabulary. You described everything brillantly. It was very vivid.

    Well done.. for a love poem. Haha.

    Keep writing!
    Cayce