I'd break it up into stanza's if I were you. For some reason it's more pleasing to the eye and you don't feel so overwhelmed or intimidated by all the words.

I do not typically like love poems, because I feel like people just keep repeating the same thing over and over again. The good thing about this one though is your vocabulary. You described everything brillantly. It was very vivid.

Well done.. for a love poem. Haha.

Keep writing!
Cayce