by Bob Aug 30, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
A spear pierced and blood was shed. |
The was a very good religous poem, but I think it could have been more intense, like the Passion of Christ movie. Make it send chills down people's spine, make it sad and sorrowful. Let the emotions spills off each word. Do you get what I'm saying? |