I really liked your repetition of the word "tears". Repetition is really powerful when done the right way.

I felt the the rhymes were just a little forced, but it wasn't terrible. I also thought the vocabulary was a little plain compared to your other poem, but it was decent.

Her tears were turned to solid gold.

^^ That was the best line in the whole poem. I love the thought of tears turning to gold, it's just so.. exotic, I guess.

Anyways, good job!

Keep writing!
Cayce