Every time

by Isabella   Aug 30, 2007


Every time I close my eyes
I see
All the stupid lies
You hide from me

Every time I catch my breath
I feel
All the broken bones you left
And now I gotta heal

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  • 17 years ago

    by Isabella

    Thank you so much.
    I know that it's rather short, but I like it.

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    You could make it a little bit longer, but it is still great with a lot of emotions behind it. Its greatest power lies in its simplicity. You have a lot of talent.
    I like the form of this one a lot, the amazing effect add lines:
    -I see-
    and
    -I feel-
    because they make whole rhythm of the poem very unique.
    5/5 from me

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