Your Fault

by Hermosa   Aug 30, 2007


You cheated on me and expected me to beg
i was distraught and spent some time in bed
I didn't eat, I didn't sleep, all I did was cry
You killed me and broke me up inside
but i had my pride and everytime i saw you in the store
i would laugh and flirt and act like you weren't there
Its all your fault what i've gone through you didn't even know
I was so broken up inside that our baby wasn't born
he died inside of me as my heart broke
you never knew about my pregnancy or about my miscarriage
Now my "friend" has told you and you want to talk about marriage
you say its to make up for what you did
I think your sick, and i never want to see you again.

Please comment and vote so i can improve on any mistakes i have made.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Neta

    Wow i love your poem and i hope you're alright but men can be jerks i know how you feel keep up the good work and keep your head up
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Herald

    The story is good, but like someone told me, some of the riming is a little forced, just go to google, search "ryhiming dicitonary" and go to first one, its sooo helpful!

  • 17 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    Wow
    i can really relate to this.
    amazingly written =]

  • 17 years ago

    by charlotte

    Im a reallll emotional person and as i read that i imagined it all and i got emotional :P its a real good poem its scary that the one you love can hurt you so bad keep it up x

  • 17 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Another fantastic poem and I wouldn't change this one at all ~_~ The only problem is that some of the i's are capitalized and some aren't so I'd just go through and capitalize them all other then that it's a fantastic piece ^_^ It is amazing how much someone who says they love you can hurt you =( They never say that in all those love stories do they? =P Another 5
    Rhea

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