Dead but still living

Man...... did this really happen to you? message me to give me the answer ok? Wow, i was crushed when i read this. very sad but good choice of words and rhyming. keep writing girl.
-Stephanie

This was so sad
and I am so sorry.
But your emotions were beautifully expressed
because its so
true that when you lose a loved one
you die with them in a way.
The pain and hurt portrayed
in this poem was so clear.
Although it was really sad subject matter
it was a brilliant poem!!

That was another very sad but wonderful poem ~_~ Death is hard and yes it feels like its almost impossible to move on but the one you loved would want you to go on and try to make a happy life ^_^ At least thats what I always had to tell myself to keep going =p You really are a talented writer =) 5/5
Rhea

Avery sad poem indeed.. very well expressed.. beautfully put together.. truth is.. this shows tht u gave up life.. in this poem. the character.. whos writing this.. just simply gives away life.. cheer up.. therz alot more to come.. u have alot more to write.. gr8 wrk..
keep on writing

Really good poem. I loved it. I'm sorry of what happened to you. Crying helps sometimes.
Hope you are doing better now.