by Jose Aug 30, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Even though we don't speak |
by Kris
LOVE IT!! |
by Hermosa
Luv it good job...your talented..keep writing |
Hey |
by MaSkEdSoUl
I like this poem. Excellent wording and it has a somewhat good rhythm but great flow. I think you should put it in stanzas because of the repetition you have in the poem. On these two lines: |
by emmerz
This was really great! and i agree with the whole rhyming thing, but this poem - just because of the message and the feel of the poem, it doesnt need to all rhyme. it grabbed my attention, and i think there WILL be many of people who can relate to it, whether they feel that way towards someone or someone feels like that about them. |