I love your poems, They hold so meaning and so much emotions, There really a joy to read, Your really good poetry writter, and this piece was just beautiful, yet sad. Very good write...

5/5

Very disheartening, a great write though very sad. Feeling flowing like a waterfall throughout and the flow was great. The first stanza was the perfect lead in, didn't give away too much but set the stage for suspense! nicely done collab. left me wanting more. 5. Balance out capitalization that is all.

Another great poem.. i love your style. 5/5

Wow. this was a great poem. its unique and emotional. i could feel the sadness portrayed into this poem. the only suggestion i have is the consistancy of capitalizing or not the firt letters of the stanzas. =]

Perfect rhyming and wording. You really put emotions into words wich is something I struggle for. Another great poem
5/5

Wow deep and nice for the contest 5/5