by The Pessimistic Peabody Aug 30, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Kind words waft, |
by Blissful
Wow. This was just amazing. The short lines held so much meaning and the flow was just great. I loved the ending because it was thought provoking. Well done *5/5* |
by Nix
Very interesting poem, it is really original and you created great atmosphere. I like the idea of this one and you expressed emotions powerfully. Well done! |
by nikki
I absolutely loved it, it was amazing. it was simple yet it made so much sense. nice work 5/5 |
by ECILA ice
Wow!! i don't know how to describe it but i really love this poem.. simple in sense that people could easily adopt the emotions and idea but magnificent because of the wording and the imagination, especially on how u portray your intense emotions.. great job!! |
by Sherry Lynn
It is such a discerning feeling when we realise all those words that we hung on to dealry are nothing mnore nor less than just words. |