Wow..i loved it, it makes me think about things...very well written 5/5

Wonderful write, this poem was full of emotion and feelings, an enjoyable poem.
keep it up and a 5/5 from me as you truly deserve it

It is such a discerning feeling when we realise all those words that we hung on to dealry are nothing mnore nor less than just words.

Words with no meaning... words with no intentions... words as you say that are just "fools gold"

--Sher

Wow!! i don't know how to describe it but i really love this poem.. simple in sense that people could easily adopt the emotions and idea but magnificent because of the wording and the imagination, especially on how u portray your intense emotions.. great job!!

I absolutely loved it, it was amazing. it was simple yet it made so much sense. nice work 5/5

Very interesting poem, it is really original and you created great atmosphere. I like the idea of this one and you expressed emotions powerfully. Well done!

Wow. This was just amazing. The short lines held so much meaning and the flow was just great. I loved the ending because it was thought provoking. Well done *5/5*