Help Me

Now this one I loved! The length of it was quite effective and got your message across perfectly. The emotions were easy to relate to and the poem was overall a joy to read. Well done *5/5*

Wow. it was short but you got the message across beautifully. the rhymes were perfect and it was wonderful. i loved it. 5/5

Yeah i agree to them (people above me)short poem though very expressive and could really hit the person's emotion directly (to who ever u want to dedicate this poem).. well i guess everyone want not only to be loved by somebody but also to feel their real presence, sincerity and so on... great job, you did captured my interest..

Short, sweet and REALLY REALLY GOOD!!! LOVED IT!! great rhymes, great rhythm, wonderful story/meanning. really well done.

Short and to the point. I like it. The flow was good and the word usage was awesome as well. I could definitely feel the emotions. Good job and keep it up 5/5