This seems like it has a good beginning but i would like to read the rest! 4/5 so far

Hey, it's Great, continue writing it, it's deep!
5/5, i'll try to read it when it's all finished.
rose<@>

Great wording, but finish it, it's awesome! lol 5/5x

Hey, it's finished, but i cant vote again, sorry! hey, like light in darkness said, i loved the emotion! great once again. . .
rose<@>

Say sumthing about never again will i let u use me for i have finally gotten away or sumthing to that sort

This is a lot better finished!! i love the emotion in this. i can tell that you are writing from the heart!!! 5/5 !!!!

It's very good.