Comments : I won't chase you anymore

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Hey hun, fantastic job. :)
    I can feel your hurt & pain. The flow was flawless & it was a very heartfelt write.

    "No matter how much it hurts me
    I still love you
    I just won't be chasing after you anymore"

    ^ The perfect ending. 5.5 Keep writing.
    -- Stephanie Lynn .+.