Of course I gave this 5, modesty is not one of my strong points..Thank you Sherry for helping me with this..you certainly have inspired me to bigger things down the road. Tim

I really liked this piece as well, You guys did a great job on this poem, The flow was really good through out the whole thing and the ending was incredible, I loved it...

5/5

Yet another great collab. The 2nd stanza was my favorite, pure perfection. The style of writing allowed me to envision being there as if seeing the tale take place before my eyes. All I would say is to even up capitalization either capitalize every stanza on none so it has a balance. 5 of course

Great job. your a great writer.. it was so interesting to read.. 5/5 i liked it alot. XD

I really like it and all its metaphors. The flow was really good and the imagery even better. The emotion I felt was really good and I also had to pause and think at the end of what it meant. I like it when a poem makes me do that. So 5/5 from me. Keep it up.

Wonderfully written, I don't know if it's supposed to but it keeps me wondering and thats great. I can't imagine writing a poem together, for me it would be tough but you make it seem so easy

Verry good.
i love it alot!
(:

Superb poem and a flawless collab. God help you to overcome all your illusion and myths. The poem is very poetic and its lexically strong.

tc
Fsams

Wow this was really great, keep it up,
i've read a couple of your poems now, and they are fantastical, so i was wondering if you could comment and vote on sum of my poems, it would be greatly appreciated.
I'm new to writing poetry so i need some feedback, thanks,
Polaroid
p.s GREAT JOB

Wow...
This is amazing collab, I enjoyed in every line.
Whole poem holds equal amounts of endless beauty and sadness. The descriptions and details grabbed my attention from the beginning and I like the great flow of the whole piece.
The poem also contains very deep message.

P.s- Thanks for the dance :)

I like it ... some of it doesn't flow perfect and it could rhyme a bit more. but it has some good lines 'Wallking today with my head hung low
Aching to look at the sun
Darkness consumes my crying soul
Why did I have to be the one

Very Good Work! You will find the answer to letting go someday. It's there, I know....I've found it.

K~