by ChaosKiller69 Aug 31, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Approaching the end |
Wow I really liked this it reminded me of someone being saved from hell. wonderful work. I really liked how even though it was an acrostic poem you managed to make it your own and create an image for the reader to see. I also like how you described the scene in metaphores. Well done |
by sarah
Omg it made me have goosebumps! I love it so much. It's beautiful. keep up the good work :D |
Well at first I did not know what Acrostic was..but I looked it up. I don't tend to write styled poetry but this was really good. It had good flow and nice imagery. I think it was really well done for your first styled poem. Good luck and keep it up! |
by JaM
Wow this is an amzing poem you dedinitely nailed it ;) for your first time, great job, 5/5 |
by Krazy
The flow seemed a bit strained, i'm not sure if you were trying to rhyme or not. the word choice is very good, and the imagery is good as well. over all it's pretty good. 4/5 |