I love the Acrostic poetry because it presents such a challenge and keeps the mind sharp.

You have done a splendid job on this one. I hope that you continue to keep it up.

I actually enjoyed reading it.

--Sher

Wow for it being your first acrostic it is amazing. I like it alot. It just flows right off the tongue. It's a deeper poem as well, which sometimes with acrostics can be harder to do. I think this poem has a lot to do with friendship and how it's a very special thing and how friends can save you. I really hope I'm not to far off base with that. Well anyway, 5/5 from me. Awesome job!

.:Danielle:.

The flow seemed a bit strained, i'm not sure if you were trying to rhyme or not. the word choice is very good, and the imagery is good as well. over all it's pretty good. 4/5

Wow this is an amzing poem you dedinitely nailed it ;) for your first time, great job, 5/5

Well at first I did not know what Acrostic was..but I looked it up. I don't tend to write styled poetry but this was really good. It had good flow and nice imagery. I think it was really well done for your first styled poem. Good luck and keep it up!

Amie

Omg it made me have goosebumps! I love it so much. It's beautiful. keep up the good work :D

Wow I really liked this it reminded me of someone being saved from hell. wonderful work. I really liked how even though it was an acrostic poem you managed to make it your own and create an image for the reader to see. I also like how you described the scene in metaphores. Well done