Comments : All The Same

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Nice job and a nice twist....you think it's gonna be a sweet poem, than you totally talk about his bad side...Good job!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    This is really a good one...=)
    and i must agree with you, as any woman will say, men are all the same...
    the poem shows a good deal of anger, in my opinion...and i find that really good...("angry poems" are like 2 in one, you release anger and you get an awesome poem...;) )
    anyway
    you're a really nice writer
    keep going
    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Not all men are the same, just the immature one's.It takes a few heartbreak's and being played before you find the one that would never do something so awful..
    You just got too learn not too fall for there game's..
    And as you portrayed in the poem you have.

    A good read,
    Much enjoyed.
    Elaine.

    P.S Hold on to hope hun, you special one will come:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Keep looking, you'll find the right guy eventually. They're not all the same... Lol.
    The flow was flawless & the word usage was good.

    "It's hard to believe I once thought you were nice
    All the sugar and sweets without any spice"
    ^ My favorite lines... very creative. 5.5 Lovely job.

    - Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by FromHeroToZero

    Wow really great poem
    :) absolutely love it
    and you're so right
    they're all the same , i always thought that one person was different but it turns out he's not
    argh ; well good job ! ;)
    Sarah
    x x

  • 17 years ago

    by jennifer leigh

    That was great
    i went through the exact same thing
    only i was too dumb to realise that they were all the same
    but keep holding on
    the right guy will be there waiting for you
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Great poem i can really relate! and let me assure u there are a few guys out there... who dont just wanna play u!

    the poem has such great flow and rhyme. loved the way it pulled me in to read more!

    Well done!
    Love
    Jacs
    xxxx

  • 15 years ago

    by [[GLAMOROUS__x]]

    Excellent poem, I can totally relate to it.
    Boys are scum.
    All they do is lie, cheat and so on.
    Fair enough, there may be a few exceptions and I mean a FEW lol.
    I couldnt have siad it better myself girl.
    You are very talented. Keep writing.
    All the best.
    Rachel
    x