Awww..ive felt this way b4...its beautiful and makes me feel sooo sad lol...but only bcuz i know how much the character wants to be with that other person...great job..sniff sniff

WoW!! Been there done that. I love it.

Aaawww this is a very sad poem. I enjoyed reading it. Excellent flow and rhythm. On this line:

"And now hear i am, 12 am, writing a poem, trying not to get caught"

Hear should be here. And on this one:

"I don't want to hear rejection, so i simple walk away"

I think simple should be simply, it'd sound better. Anyways other than those it was an excellent poem. In order to get what you want you have to have courage and strength. Dont be scared just go for it, you'll go throughout your life saying "what if..." no one should ever say that, take a chance. Excellent poem. Keep writing!

Oh and capitalize the "i's" lol I dont know why but it bugs me lol.

Just one thing - when rhyming, try not to rhyme with the same word - it makes for a better poem if you use different words. other than that, it was good.

Such a sweet poem.
very lovely.
great job!!!!

Oh thats so sweet...its very hard to express your feelings sometimes but take a chance cause you never know it might be true love.