Interesting poem to say the least, kept my attention as its different from other poems, in a good way I assure you. It was a geat read, leaves the fun and wonder intact with the ending. I believe quit should be quiet, If I am mistaken feel free to let me know. keep up the good work. 5 from me

A good poem with some lovely imagery I enjoyed this piece very much.

Full of sorrow and regret... yet; for some reason there is a sense that you still needed to protect her. In a way it is as though you did not want anyone to know because you did not want her to feel your sorrow....

--Sher

I got the same feeling as Sher.

Goran, As always your peice is amazing. All your poems read from the heart.
The sorrow and emotion in this is tear causing, and repetition was effective,by really making those emotion's stronger.

Keep it up.
5/5 Elly.:)

So true, no one knew, no one know, and no one will ever know, but yet the truth will remain true, as none of us can change what is happened, even if we want to

This is pretty, goran, but i have a few suggestions give it a tighter structure, and if there anything you want capitalized because when you say miss poet, i feel like it should say Miss Poet, and so on. =]

Well I liked it. It had good flow and good imagery and the emotion was evident. I really don't like the style with it running on, I just really like stanzas and having poems broken up a bit. Overall it was good and I still gave you a 5/5 because again the whole breaking up the poem is my own personal taste and I can't mark ya down for that.

I think it is an awesome poem, but maybe I would take out a few of the No One Knew's in there. The reptition makes it stronger if it's not used quite as often and might make it flow better. Other than that though it is an awesome poem. I like it a lot. It's very touching.

.:Danielle:.

Oh my, i loved it. the way you described everything that was happening was awesome. you captured the idea brilliantly. 5/5

Ok i really liked this one, they just keep coming and they just keep getting better and better, i can't believe it. you've outdone yourself again. beautiful job.