This was an outstanding poem, So much truth in it ,being around people don`t erase lonliness but only when we really connect with a person does it go away. I truly enjoyed this my friend.

Bert
What a wonderful piece you have written. Very deep and intense. Your talent leaves me in awe.
Excellent job!
Take care your friend Cindy

I liked the way you repeated those two lines a couple of times. it sounded nice to me :)
and I think you chose a good title for it :)

Marjan x

One of my favorites! Your words are captivating, and perfectly fitting. I felt several emotions in this piece -- each strong and true. Beautiful.

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N