A woo-hoo @ this amazing piece.. indeed.

the wording was absoultely awe-some..

"..Scars are deep,
Blood is dark,
Life is blank,
And you're invisible.."

a truly superb start.. carried out very well..and yes, damn finely expressed.

Great piece this.

~Wake~

Such an intreging poem!!
I must admite this is the first time iv seen a peom set out like that :) which made it even better :P
its super amazing

5/5

I love this poem its great :) Great work .. very sad but its got much feeling and work put into it and i can put myself in tha place. Good job again

Wow, I love this piece. It is so deep and touching, you expressed emotions excellently. I can relate to this amazing poem. Every line is truly effective filled with sadness and sorrow. This poem is also unique and it has powerful and vivid imagery.
5/5 from me