by KeyxMashingxParody Aug 31, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Of all the days I've waited, |
by 4 track demo
I enjoyed this...it worked for me, you get a great big HELL YEAH... the only negative thing is the disclaimer thing at the end it kinda scared me... |
Interesting poem. it was well written at the beginning, with nice flow, but i found myself losing interest about 2/3 of the way through. the rhythem seemed a little off... other than that, it was really well done! food for thought! |
Great job. I loved it. The flow was great and you used punctuations and everything. I miss that sometimes when i read poems without. It shows you spent time on it. I definitely felt the emotion and I liked the concept of love being the evil entity while pain and sorrow were like the protagonists in your life. Good Job and keep it up. |
by Sherry Lynn
Ewww... enticing and thought provoking. I have never looked at it that way and yet it all makes perfect sense. |