by Miu
Your poems are always a bit hard for me to understand. The meening in them. Poem itself tells about end but the why that kind of title? Overall, it was a great write. Flowed very nicely, and also liked the discriptions for the feelings. |
by Kalgalath
Well i liked it and i believe i got the whole meaning of it. |
Good poem short and sweet : ) anyway i liked the words you used 5/5 <33 |
by JustKristina
Great poem! i loved the flow of it! it was really good, and i loved the hidden meaning.. great work on this one! keep it up |
WOW! that was great I agree and understand it at the same time. That is how I feel! |
by kasia nicole
That was a really good poem i really liked 5/5 |
I like this... |
by mikaella
I love this it is short and to the piont but yet ity says everything ilove it you should comment and vote on my poems |
by mikaella
I love this it is short and to the piont but yet ity says everything ilove it you should comment and vote on my poems |
by Brandy
Loved the poem...short but to the point...5 |
by Kate Hicks
Heart felt and emotional. I can hear the desperation. well done. 5/5 |
by desiree
Liek the rhyming of it. |
by kla
I love this its short simple and says alot, |
by stephanie
Wow thats a great poem it says alot and it is nice that a guy can show his sencitive side |
by Sarah
Sweet poem. (10000000 WOW's) |
Good!! |
Good!! |
by Candy Rain
This was good |