by Summer Aug 31, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I sit here alone, |
by Saving Grace
Nice work. Its sad, but powerful. Its an amazing write though. It flowed well and ur rhyme scheme was constant throughout the entire piece. Keep it up. 5/5 |
by Mary
This is so sad but yet i can relate to it with e every ounce.... good job keep it up :-) |
by David
Sad but great.. well written.. keep it up 5/5 |
by Ingrid
What a sad poem for such a young girl! |
by ILoveJoshua
This is sad.. but good...!! |