This is sad.. but good...!!

What a sad poem for such a young girl!
It's a good one, though....

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Sad but great.. well written.. keep it up 5/5

This is so sad but yet i can relate to it with e every ounce.... good job keep it up :-)

Nice work. Its sad, but powerful. Its an amazing write though. It flowed well and ur rhyme scheme was constant throughout the entire piece. Keep it up. 5/5