"..Youre the one running the other way
Now youre the one with nothing to say.."

my fav. lines.. an awesome start. superbly carried out.. great work.

~Wake~

Im ready to forgive and forget
But I can tell you still regret
Every promise you never kept

Great freaking line! i love it!
u have lots of talent!

Wow beautiful write..
keep it up!
-Lisa

Omg! i absolutely ADORE your poetry you are so good! =] the more i read the more i like! i hope you pursue a career or something in writing because i can bet you i shall be one of the first to buy your book!=D

I LOVE this poem!!! It's not only a FANTASTIC poem but it relates to me in many ways so its really personal and touching!! God I love your work so much!!! You are blessed!!

So do me a favor
And look me in the eyes
And tell me you dont hate me
Then everything will be fine

^^^^Sometimes that is all we need to hear to be able to move on.
You have done a good job on putting your emotion into words:)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid