Comments : True love

  • 17 years ago

    by Lisa

    Vety cute piece:)
    i hope i get a love to be this way someday
    take care and keep up your poetry

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    This poem is so beautifully true.
    but we all kno our first love's rarely work out, but we try so hard to keep close to their hearts don't we?
    well, wonderful write. i loved the flow and all the emotion you expressed.
    job well done.