Wow they were all amazing,
each one just as good as the others
but i liked this one the3 best
wonderful flow and emotion
everything was awesome
good job
and i think ur really good at series poem :)

ashleigh

Well i like this poem alot although i haven't read the rest of these poems. i will read them and comment them but what inspired u to write these poems who could have been so lucky for u to write this poem?

Well like i said i would and have commented and read all the series of the poems, i think i no the secret but i will wait and lets see if im write.

I loved this poem, keenan you are so talented. This seriously made me tear, the way you wrote it. Hmm, it's so pure and heavenly. It's as if you put out all your emotion into this series. I loved all of them, but this ending, this last part. This said the most to me, it's amazing keenan. You are amazing, you're so incredible.

Very nice poem and I like the way u hav used the words. Keep writing and sharing

5/5
Fsams

This is one of my favorites.
It sounds like it was written straight from the start.
It is expressive and I think you did a wonderful job on it.
5/5

I no you probably should read the first of a series first haha. But i thort id comment on this after i red it..

Its a wonderful poem & i promise that by the end of this poem there was a simple tear rested under my eye..

It showed great talent & it had perfect understanding..

I loved it!! Well done & keep up your wonderful poetry..

*Hunny*

Ok i red the others..

BUt id have to say this one was probably my favourite of the series!!

EXCELLENT.!!

*Hunny*