Well, i certainly felt the pain of this one. really tragic. i love your style. keep it up

Deep poem. really good. 5/5

amanda

Very Good! i love it! tho it was short i defitnaly felt the pain and emotion used there!
Great job! keep it up! 5/5

Really different from what i have ever read.....thats a gud thing. great job and i will definately read more!

mand x

Thats sad... very emotional I don't really know how that feels... but something in that makes me pity you

Nadia

5/5