Wouldn't It Be Good

by Avrii Monrielle   Sep 1, 2007


Wouldn't It Be Good (Kyrielle)

If the world ever could,
Wouldn't it be good,
To have the sky closeby,
With each other at our sides?

Where the wind grasps easily,
The murky boughs of family,
And friendship close behind,
With each other at our sides.

How the blades would wamble,
The lowly grass ensemble,
Our memories entertwined,
With each other at our sides.

Would the tree leaves fall,
Answering autumn's call?
Those rare thoughts come to mind,
With each other at our sides.

Wouldn't it be great,
To never feel much hate,
And be loved for all of time,
With each other at our sides?

To stop such sallow war,
And mend our lifelong scars,
Wouldn't peace be nice,
With each other at our sides?

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(A kyrielle is written in rhyming couplets or quatrains. It uses the phrase "Lord have mercy", or a variant on it, as a refrain as the second line of the couplet or last line of the quatrain. In less strict usage, other phrases like "O God, be merciful to me", and sometimes single words, are used as the refrain. The structure is aabB and so forth. )

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  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I`ve always loved Kyrielle`s. They are a hard style to write, but I must say you did a great job on this one. It really stood out to me. Your wording was right on the dot with the imagery, which made it that much easier to read for me. Great job.

    5.5
    :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Ooooo very good rainy! love the rhyme sceme as well, i dont usually do too good with those becuz the words just flow out sdo recklessly i can't put them into a meter or style. but i'lll try to work on that! kk, luv yaaa, comment or message anytime, i'm here to chat!

  • 17 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Very nice very nice indeed