Very nice very nice indeed

Ooooo very good rainy! love the rhyme sceme as well, i dont usually do too good with those becuz the words just flow out sdo recklessly i can't put them into a meter or style. but i'lll try to work on that! kk, luv yaaa, comment or message anytime, i'm here to chat!

I`ve always loved Kyrielle`s. They are a hard style to write, but I must say you did a great job on this one. It really stood out to me. Your wording was right on the dot with the imagery, which made it that much easier to read for me. Great job.

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